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    Aela -- Year 216

    QOTY

    "So she smiles prettily and steals away when she can. Feels the brutal pounding of others around her with a savagery that she has never comprehended—their emotions so vast, their hearts so wicked. It warps her more than she was already warped. It presses a thumbprint of cruelty into her darkness, shaping her into a thing of shadow, a thing of longing, a thing carved from the darkness between every breath." --Baptiste, written by Laura


    FINAL ROUND: BRENNEN v. KAGERUS
    #11
    WINNER: BRENNEN

    BRENNEN (12.05 points)

    Attacks (-3/+3): 2.3

    Attack 1 (Total)
    +3 Slashing with bone horn

    Attack 2 (Total)
    /0 rears to strike out with forelegs

    Attack 2 (Total)
    + 2 bucking

    Attack 3
    + 3 ice wall

    Attack 4
    +3 Ramming injured leg

    Attack 5
    +3 Bone beast

    Defenses (-3/+3): 2

    Defense 1 (Total)
    +3 Head down to prevent against attack

    Defense 2 (Total)
    +3 Takes hit kinda

    Defense 3 (Total)
    / 0 running away

    Realism (-2/+2) : 2.25

    Post 1 (Total)
    +2 taking into consideration the lack of wings with movement

    Post 2 (Total)
    + 3 taking hits

    Post 3 (Total)
    + 2

    Post 4 [Closing Defense, if applicable] (Total)
    + 2

    Creativity (-3/+3): 2.5

    Post 1 (Total)
    +2

    Post 2 (Total)
    +3

    Post 3 (Total)
    + 3

    Post 4 [Closing Defense, if applicable] (Total)
    + 2

    Grammar (-3/+3): +3

    Grammar (-1/+1):
    +1
    Readability: (-1/+1):
    +1
    Powerplaying: (-1/+1):
    +1

    KAGERUS (10.2 pts)

    Attacks (-3/+3): 1.3

    Attack 1 (Total)
    /0 Rearing with intent to topple

    Attack 2 (Total)
    + 2 bucking 3 times

    Attack 2 (Total)
    + 2 slash with horn

    Defenses (-3/+3): 2.6

    Defense 1 (Total)
    +3 Lock horns

    Defense 2 (Total)
    + 2 always moving, feint to hit bicep

    Defense 3 (Total)
    + Sticking near Brennen with the beast

    Realism (-2/+2) : +2

    Post 1 (Total)
    + 2

    Post 2 (Total)
    + 2

    Post 3 (Total)
    + 2

    Creativity (-3/+3): 1.3 pts

    Post 1 (Total)
    + 1

    Post 2 (Total)
    0

    Post 3 (Total)
    + 3

    Grammar (-3/+3): +3

    Grammar (-1/+1):
    +1
    Readability: (-1/+1):
    +1
    Powerplaying: (-1/+1):
    +1
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