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    Assailant -- Year 226

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    "But the dream, the echo, slips from him as quickly as he had found it and as consciousness comes to him (a slap and not the gentle waves of oceanic tides), it dissolves entirely. His muscles relax as the cold claims him again, as the numbness sets in, and when his grey eyes open, there’s nothing but the faint after burn of a dream often trod and never remembered." --Brigade, written by Laura

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    [mock]  Jesper vs Leilan
    Jesper
    sly as a fox
    Pangea
    #8
    06-25-2018, 09:57 PM
    Congratulations @[Vanilla Custard]/Nilla!!

    And, thank you for the feedback Devin! I really appreciate the tips and analysis. I also like knowing the rubric in advance so, I can be mindful of what is being judged. I will keep trying to tone it down for battle posts. Think bland, .splash.!!

    <3
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    Jesper vs Leilan - by Brennen - 05-15-2018, 09:11 PM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by Jesper - 05-17-2018, 08:23 PM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by Leilan - 05-19-2018, 06:48 AM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by Jesper - 05-20-2018, 12:18 AM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by Leilan - 05-21-2018, 02:49 PM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by Jesper - 05-23-2018, 08:01 PM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by devin - 06-25-2018, 09:11 PM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by Jesper - 06-25-2018, 09:57 PM
    RE: Jesper vs Leilan - by Vanilla Custard - 06-25-2018, 11:54 PM



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