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    • Year: 233
    • Season: Winter
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    Assailant -- Year 226

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    "But the dream, the echo, slips from him as quickly as he had found it and as consciousness comes to him (a slap and not the gentle waves of oceanic tides), it dissolves entirely. His muscles relax as the cold claims him again, as the numbness sets in, and when his grey eyes open, there’s nothing but the faint after burn of a dream often trod and never remembered." --Brigade, written by Laura

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    Pride88
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    #3
    11-16-2015, 12:43 PM
    Thanks!!

    I think I am going to toss the irish thing... it was what made the post hard to write beyond the second paragraph.... grammar and I are not friends.... mostly my iPad and auto-correct has ruined my capitilization of "i"

    Thanks Cassi!
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    writing feedback - by Pride88 - 11-15-2015, 09:16 PM
    RE: writing feedback - by Cassi - 11-16-2015, 10:39 AM
    RE: writing feedback - by Pride88 - 11-16-2015, 12:43 PM



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