New adventures (good, neutral)

[Chezter]

I looked at Eld. She was the most beautiful mare I had ever seen. I stood there awestruck at her beauty. "Yes, I-I am. Uh, lost that is." I forgot something. Right! "Where are my manners? I appreciate your fine offer. My name is Chezter. I am in need of a home. " My unusually long mane flows like silk in the light spring breeze. How do I compliment her beauty and kindness? "I nice" D'oh! Why did I say that! Surely I messed it up. In my attempt to say "I think your nice.", I left out Think and your. Only a fool would not say the whole thing, or someone deep in love.