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    Assailant -- Year 226

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    "But the dream, the echo, slips from him as quickly as he had found it and as consciousness comes to him (a slap and not the gentle waves of oceanic tides), it dissolves entirely. His muscles relax as the cold claims him again, as the numbness sets in, and when his grey eyes open, there’s nothing but the faint after burn of a dream often trod and never remembered." --Brigade, written by Laura


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    And you know I'm loaded [branka]
    #12
    Thank you, very much appreciate the critique at the end - much helpful, I shall work on these things

    (07-22-2015, 08:45 AM)Call Wrote: Thank you, very much appreciate the critique at the end - much helpful, I shall work on these things

    Also I found this and was trying to work with it
    http://sieluunresource.tumblr.com/post/9...p-fighting
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    Messages In This Thread
    And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Killgore - 07-10-2015, 10:02 AM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Branka - 07-10-2015, 10:16 AM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Branka - 07-14-2015, 11:42 AM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Call - 07-16-2015, 09:00 AM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Branka - 07-21-2015, 05:56 AM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Call - 07-21-2015, 07:32 AM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Kyra - 07-21-2015, 10:26 AM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Kyra - 07-21-2015, 12:01 PM
    RE: And you know I'm loaded [branka] - by Call - 07-22-2015, 08:45 AM



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