Do mine eyes decieve me?(any)

[Hamster]

This is what Nadyah had posted:
"look at the mare as she approaches me. Her golden locks flowing in the breeze. As she carefully avoided the sharp rocks on the ground, I notice she is a new member. I smile bigger, stronger. "No, dear, I'm fine." I say, instantly picking the concern on her voice. The foal inside me turns. "My name is Nadyah. I used to live here. I-I left because-"my voice trails off like the one I took. Why did I leave?"Because I found the man of my dreams." I say, finding my voice again. "Oh, your names Becca? Nice to meet you! I moved to Echo Trails in the dale with Kii. How's Mast doing adjusting? How do you like it here? It seems to be mending well." I say, seeing that the ashes were left alone.

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I look at the mare as she approaches me. Her golden locks flowing in the breeze. As she carefully avoided the sharp rocks on the ground, I notice she is a new member. I smile bigger, stronger. "No, dear, I'm fine." I say, instantly picking the concern on her voice. The foal inside me turns. "My name is Nadyah. I used to live here. I-I left because-"my voice trails off like the one I took. Why did I leave?"Because I found the man of my dreams." I say, finding my voice again. "Oh, your names Becca? Nice to meet you! I moved to Echo Trails in the dale with Kii. How's Mast doing adjusting? How do you like it here? It seems to be mending well." I say, seeing that the ashes were left alone.