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    Assailant -- Year 226

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    "But the dream, the echo, slips from him as quickly as he had found it and as consciousness comes to him (a slap and not the gentle waves of oceanic tides), it dissolves entirely. His muscles relax as the cold claims him again, as the numbness sets in, and when his grey eyes open, there’s nothing but the faint after burn of a dream often trod and never remembered." --Brigade, written by Laura


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    This is kind of brief too lol. Anyways when I’m reading I get really engaged by the amount of “fluff” or very advanced/unique word choices, I just feel like it pulls the reader in and makes the current situation so intricate, and personalized. I also love when characters are consciously thinking to themselves, I just find it so fascinating because you really get to see the character’s personality.

    Btw I’m a big fan of your words <3
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    random story discussion - by SamShine - 03-28-2019, 02:28 AM
    RE: random story discussion - by jenger - 03-28-2019, 06:20 PM
    RE: random story discussion - by Lena - 03-29-2019, 10:56 AM
    RE: random story discussion - by SamShine - 03-29-2019, 09:06 PM



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