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    Assailant -- Year 226

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    "But the dream, the echo, slips from him as quickly as he had found it and as consciousness comes to him (a slap and not the gentle waves of oceanic tides), it dissolves entirely. His muscles relax as the cold claims him again, as the numbness sets in, and when his grey eyes open, there’s nothing but the faint after burn of a dream often trod and never remembered." --Brigade, written by Laura


    Sterile vs highly sterile suggestion
    #1
    I just have a quick suggestion re: sterile and highly sterile. As I understand it, sterile horses can never have children while highly sterile horses have a 50/50 shot. I feel like this can be a bit confusing, so my suggestion would be to change highly sterile to something like infertile to hopefully better capture the difference between the two. Obviously not a huge deal either way but I just wanted to throw it out there
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    #2
    i feel like infertility might create the same issue as highly sterile. Maybe "Low Fertility" would be better.
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